The Day My Sister And I Turned Into Wild Beasts Patched -

My transformation came later, in the driveway, after the door had slammed and the car had roared to life. Elara was driving—too fast, too furious, her knuckles white on the wheel. She was cursing, a beautiful, blasphemous river of words that washed away the politeness of the dining room. I sat in the passenger seat, trembling.

We were grunting. Actual, guttural grunts of satisfaction. We smeared grease and sugar on our chins. We abandoned the social contract of "napkins" and "manners." The sheer, unadulterated pleasure of cold food in a hot body took precedence over everything else. the day my sister and i turned into wild beasts

As the moon rose high in the sky, we found a clearing and collapsed on the grass, exhausted but exhilarated. We looked at each other, and I could see the wonder and excitement in Emma's eyes. My transformation came later, in the driveway, after

It didn’t happen during a full moon, and there wasn’t a gypsy curse or a bubbling potion involved. It happened on a Tuesday in mid-July, during a heatwave that felt less like weather and more like a punishment. The air conditioner in our living room had gasped its final breath at 9:00 AM, and by noon, the house had transformed into a convection oven. I sat in the passenger seat, trembling

Should I add more about the "beast" versions of the characters?